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Lady Of My Mind by ~Dark-Yuki:iconDark-Yuki:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Ballad


she likes to dance
she likes to sing
if you ever get the chance
watch her dance like you were a king

any man who picks her as his bride
made a great choice
from her graceful stride
to her enchanting voice

she would be a great lady
but she is just the lady of my mind..
©2006-2009 ~Dark-Yuki
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Author's Comments

this is just a poem i did awhile ago. i was justing thinking and this came to my mind.

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:icondorkanese:
~dorkanese Jan 17, 2006, 4:51:17 PM
Hmm... i like the concept. You could go places with this idea. Muy bonito.

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"Keep close the words of Syadasti: 'TIS AN ILL WIND THAT BLOWS NO MINDS."--The Principia Discordia
:icondark-yuki:
~Dark-Yuki Jan 17, 2006, 5:25:21 PM
i could go places with this idea?
:icondorkanese:
~dorkanese Jan 18, 2006, 3:37:10 PM
yep, you could do quite a lot with it.

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"Keep close the words of Syadasti: 'TIS AN ILL WIND THAT BLOWS NO MINDS."--The Principia Discordia
:icondorkanese:
~dorkanese Jan 18, 2006, 4:20:25 PM
~.^;

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"Keep close the words of Syadasti: 'TIS AN ILL WIND THAT BLOWS NO MINDS."--The Principia Discordia
:icondark-yuki:
~Dark-Yuki Jan 18, 2006, 4:31:00 PM
...*is confusided alittle*
:icondorkanese:
~dorkanese Jan 18, 2006, 4:35:34 PM
Raised eyebrow, opursed lips, and the silly sweatdrop from anime

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"Keep close the words of Syadasti: 'TIS AN ILL WIND THAT BLOWS NO MINDS."--The Principia Discordia
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~Roseille Jan 16, 2007, 5:02:36 PM
Hey, this is interesting! I like the final line... yay for imaginary people.

I like the way the final line gives the whole poem a surreal feel. :)

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